Scorpion by John Frazee

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Lester Curtis
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Scorpion by John Frazee

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I thought this was going to be a disappointing rehash, but the last verse redeemed it a little.

It would have been better with more work to get the meter consistent.

Not great, but it's better than I thought it would be.
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