The Goblin's Whistle by Bob Griffin

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Lester Curtis
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This one didn't do much for me . . . I'm not sure, but I think the rhythm of the words was too monotonous . . . it had good characterization, plot, etc., but . . . it lacked a buildup of tension, I guess.
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