The Process By Mike Wilson
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Re: The Process By Mike Wilson
I don't think he realized that sending the file was urgent -- until people started chasing him.
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Re: The Process By Mike Wilson
I did notice one glaring inconsistency . . . he's in his house, trying to send the message, and hears a bunch of gunfire against the house, and glass shattering -- and in the very next paragraph, it says the windows are bullet-resistant.
Gotta watch the details . . .
Also, I've got to wonder why the 'former energy magnates' might keep on trying to kill him even after the process is in widespread use. I'd think they'd just go off and try to find some other way to gouge the public.
Gotta watch the details . . .
Also, I've got to wonder why the 'former energy magnates' might keep on trying to kill him even after the process is in widespread use. I'd think they'd just go off and try to find some other way to gouge the public.
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