Ghost by Robyn Green

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Ghost by Robyn Green

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It's unusual to find a 'surprise ending' story that works as well as this one . . . I like this writer.

Proofreading has its benefits; I spotted a few technical glitches: phrases repeated, or sometimes missing a word. Aside from that, I enjoyed it, mostly for it's eccentricity. Characterization was quite good, and I enjoyed the little bit of sibling rivalry. Strangers' reactions kept me intrigued.

Not bad.
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