Cold Comfort A Fa'teke Tale by Matthew A. Re
Posted: November 17, 2007, 11:29:25 AM
A tell from a world far far away. Not much of a story--- just a typical tell that has been rehashed
to fit into an alien world that appears to be similar to Earth. The story wasn’t exciting or interesting. Almost bland.
On the positive side, the writing, I felt, was good. The dialogue good, and the non-verbal communication very good---sensory input. And the characters seemed to come alive, contribute to the story’s surroundings and their dialogues easy to follow.
If this story is a chapter from on ongoing series or novel then it might have more merit to a reader who has read about Fa'Teke.
to fit into an alien world that appears to be similar to Earth. The story wasn’t exciting or interesting. Almost bland.
On the positive side, the writing, I felt, was good. The dialogue good, and the non-verbal communication very good---sensory input. And the characters seemed to come alive, contribute to the story’s surroundings and their dialogues easy to follow.
If this story is a chapter from on ongoing series or novel then it might have more merit to a reader who has read about Fa'Teke.