Apollo by Holly R. Appling

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Apollo by Holly R. Appling

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I usually don't comment much on the poems here, but I like this one. Hey, how could you not like
By morning, he surges

Like a bird of chrome and smoke over
Slow snow-covered oceans –
Beautiful imagery, and if you read it aloud, it even has tactile appeal. Nice rhythms in it. too.
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