Neko by Richard Tornello

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Lester Curtis
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Neko by Richard Tornello

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Not too bad for a swords-and-sorcery tale, but it seems incomplete . . . where is the rest?
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rick tornello wrote:Would it be fair To Robert who worked hard on the editing If I posted a new ending?

I have been working on this since all your comments.

Robert, please, you tell me if you think it's okay and within the bounds of proper editor- writer-reader etiquette. If so I will.

RT
Your story, your choice. Did you want to post it here in the forum, or provide a link in the index or in the story file to the alternate version? (The latter choices will take a bit longer, since I am away from the machine with the relevant files.) Is your new ending intended to close things off for those who like a clearly-self-contained stories?
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Great, Rick, thanks. Now I can't wait for the sequel.
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